X-rated out-takes
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purplerabbitOkay, so sometimes writing can be very frustrating. When I know what needs to come next but the words aren't coming. Sometimes it helps to write something else with the same characters until it starts to flow again.
So in a perverse mood I wrote what I am calling the Xcuts. X-rated versions of the currently R-rated sex scenes in the book. Lots of fun. So I thought I would offer a tidbit or two to those who might enjoy them.
Gripped with rising fear, Ahmehas had not wanted to look at Leeahlm and tried to pull away. What happened next stunned him. As Leeahlm twisted his arm and threw him back, every instinct told him that we was about to die. Even as those dark eyes met his, he believed it. A kiss would never have occurred to him.
That kiss breathed fire into his body. Stiffening, he threw his head back, moaning. Every nerve hummed and he felt himself hard. He exposed his neck to the other man and felt him react with his own heat, his mouth savoring the exposed skin. Like a panther playing with its prey, Leeahlm pinned him and began to the process of devouring him. Leeahlm sucked and bit the younger man’s neck before working his way down to his chest. There he took each nipple into his mouth, sucking, biting and running his tongue around them as they hardened. Both their bodies were slick with sweat and Ahmehas could feel the length of Leeahlm as the older man slid over him. Leeahlm’s muscled body and hard cock rubbed down the length of Ahmehas as he moved. The long black hair fell like a curtain around the man’s bent head and the sensation of it followed his wet mouth. Ahmehas’ senses redoubled as he found himself both predator and prey. He could still feel the other man’s weight on him, but now he also felt himself atop, sliding down his own body, tasting himself. He tasted his own sweat and his own cock as Leeahlm took it into his mouth, licking and sucking. Then Leeahlm pulled his body back up against him until their cocks lay side by side. Leeahlm wrapped one hand around both and began stroking them together, rocking his body against Ahmehas’. The sensations built until Ahmehas no longer wondered which body was his, doubling and redoubling sensations rocked them. When it finally came, sweat, seed and sound combined as Ahmehas/Leeahlm felt his back bow with the release.
In time, the Roahkin slept in the sunlight on a ledge.
So in a perverse mood I wrote what I am calling the Xcuts. X-rated versions of the currently R-rated sex scenes in the book. Lots of fun. So I thought I would offer a tidbit or two to those who might enjoy them.
Gripped with rising fear, Ahmehas had not wanted to look at Leeahlm and tried to pull away. What happened next stunned him. As Leeahlm twisted his arm and threw him back, every instinct told him that we was about to die. Even as those dark eyes met his, he believed it. A kiss would never have occurred to him.
That kiss breathed fire into his body. Stiffening, he threw his head back, moaning. Every nerve hummed and he felt himself hard. He exposed his neck to the other man and felt him react with his own heat, his mouth savoring the exposed skin. Like a panther playing with its prey, Leeahlm pinned him and began to the process of devouring him. Leeahlm sucked and bit the younger man’s neck before working his way down to his chest. There he took each nipple into his mouth, sucking, biting and running his tongue around them as they hardened. Both their bodies were slick with sweat and Ahmehas could feel the length of Leeahlm as the older man slid over him. Leeahlm’s muscled body and hard cock rubbed down the length of Ahmehas as he moved. The long black hair fell like a curtain around the man’s bent head and the sensation of it followed his wet mouth. Ahmehas’ senses redoubled as he found himself both predator and prey. He could still feel the other man’s weight on him, but now he also felt himself atop, sliding down his own body, tasting himself. He tasted his own sweat and his own cock as Leeahlm took it into his mouth, licking and sucking. Then Leeahlm pulled his body back up against him until their cocks lay side by side. Leeahlm wrapped one hand around both and began stroking them together, rocking his body against Ahmehas’. The sensations built until Ahmehas no longer wondered which body was his, doubling and redoubling sensations rocked them. When it finally came, sweat, seed and sound combined as Ahmehas/Leeahlm felt his back bow with the release.
In time, the Roahkin slept in the sunlight on a ledge.
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Date: 2004-07-24 12:38 am (UTC)More please. :)