Up writing again...

A quote from the last part of Chapter 12:

Visions have no mercy or morality. They did not show Allaahtba what she should do, only what will be. The pattern cares not for what is right or wrong, in fact, it does not care at all. Stars are born and die, the universe does not mourn them. It has less concern for what happens to people. It is only we that cry, rage and mourn even the inevitable. Maybe especially the inevitable.


In other news, I have incorporated some parts of the xcuts into the real text. Felt the greater detail helped a lot in Chapter 3, Chapter 6 & Chapter 12. For those following the updates, you might want to reread the sex scenes in those chapters.

Chapter 12 - Xcut

For those still following the exploits of Leeahlm and Ahmehas, here is another xcut. Strange that most of the best sex scenes so far are with the two guys. I know, I know -- I am a big ole pervert!

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